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Hello again! It’s already the third week in January and time is moving at warp speed. Today, I’m posting another snippet from my wip, River’s Edge.
Scene set up: Still in courtroom.
“Let me see what she’s got there,” the judge demanded, holding out his hand for the pictures.
A hint of pink tinged her cheeks as Edge met her gaze, discovering eyes as green as the willow branches she’d hidden behind.
Now that it looked like he could relax, he studied her.
She was a small, thin female past the first blush of womanhood.
Her molasses colored hair bundled into a severe bun at her nape, framed a thin face with a sharp little nose and a mouth forming a delicate bow with a surprisingly full lower lip.
Old maid, plain as a mud-fence, and peeping-tom or not, he liked everything about Miss Prescott when she stared down the hostile audience and declared him innocent.
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Thanks for stopping by, everyone.
Have a great week!
Gem
Loving the sixes from this story! I'm so intrigued.
I am just loving this more and more, Gem! Finish it already, so I can buy it! Great six.
Wow, I've loved everything I've read from this story!
I love her description in his POV. Well done, Gem. Love this story!
Amazing description, fantastic atmosphere, I'm loving this story. WOW
This story is one of favorites. I love it and can't wait to buy it. Write, Gem, Write faster!
I love this too – your character's distinctive voice really makes it pop.
This just gets better and better.
I like his frank appraisal and his appreciation of what others have dismissed. Great six, Gem.
I love it too – it's funny and sexy and sad – but some of the lines read like a period piece …. does not sound contemporary. Maybe it's just me. Anyway love where this is going
Can't wait to see what develops between these two
Love his description of her
Ooh, I love his mixed impressions of her, and the see-sawing way he describes her.
love your vivid descriptions! always worth the visit!
The way he described her lips, I think he'll get past the old-maid exterior. And I bet the interior is anything but old-maidish. Love this one so far!
"Molasses colored hair" is wonderful. Easy to picture that and a perfect lead-in to the rest of the description. Good work!
Really great description!
Great description. Great voice. Can't wait to see where this story goes.
Love it! Love your writing. Totally hooked on this one.
Great six, again. You never disappoint.
Wonder if he'll still like her after the whole courtroom sees the pictures!
She'll have a lot of explaining to do!
Great description of her.
I love this – especially his final assessment!
This just leaps off the page. Well done!
This is so awesome! Love "plain as a mud fence"!
Great descriptions!
LOL I bet he did.
Great chemistry and suspense!
Love these characters, and I love his assessment of Miss Prescott. *pouts* I want more.
Love how he sees the beauty in her even after that description, although for selfish reasons!
I’m with everyone else, too. I’m loving this.
what a great description
Great description! Love how you paint a picture with these snippets!
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